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Tips for writing the performance review
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For managers, the one activity more dreaded than receiving a performance review is writing one. So it’s no wonder many reviews fall short of their real intention: to provide a springboard for further growth and accomplishment. How can the performance review guide a productive discussion about an employee’s potential or shortcomings? These tips can make writing and conducting a performance review less painful—and more behavior driven—for manager and employee alike.
Example for low performance: “Bill’s performance on Leadership and Teamwork Behavior falls below expectations. One example occurred when Bill assigned two junior accountants to project XYZ, not recognizing that they did not possess the requisite skills to succeed and then resisted repeated requests from them for additional training. Bill’s leadership inaction resulted in a significant project delay and overtime costs that could have been avoided. Going forward, Bill needs to develop a realistic sense of his staff’s capabilities and provide the tools and training they need.
“One way for Bill to accomplish this is to create a matrix of the skills required for the project and map each person’s capabilities along that matrix. Then, he can assign staff to projects based on the compatibility of their skill set to the requirements of the project. When the skill set required for the task doesn’t match, Bill can develop a workaround to complete projects in a timely way. And then he can determine what needs his staff has for future development.”
Wilma Davidson (wilma@wilmadavidson.com) is a member of the faculty at the University of South Florida, Sarasota-Manatee. She has been a business writing and presentation skills coach to corporations for more than two decades. Richard D. Easter (easters@embarqmail.com) is an undergraduate English student at the University of South Florida, Sarasota-Manatee. For the past 29 years, he has also been employed at a nuclear power plant where he writes repair directives for site personnel.
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